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I hope you like it! It was quite a challenge! but I learned a lot especially about shading and proportions

Thanks so much for commissioning me

a Group shot like this is 40

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Things I will draw : People Fanart Dragons animals and birds (no critters..

) OCs Violence and "some" blood Some robots..I'm not so good with them Angel's and other winged creatures ( not demons)

Things I won't draw Yaoi or any slash, Yuri etc Porn Pairings( depends which one) Loosely dressed characters or people. Gory things like guts spilling out.

Digital and Traditional Sketches are 10

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from left to right is:
Blue beetle, Liza, Green lantern( lower right Flash

I haven't actually heard of blue beetle before...

Anyway Hope you like it <3
I also made my own watermark
_{I'll send you the picture without the watermark}
Blue beetle, Green Lantern and Flash belong to DC
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Liza belongs to

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=astarayel Jan 8, 2013

This is pretty cool! I like the setup, and the fact that everyone is in a unique pose so that the group doesn't look like a bunch of awkward people standing together.

The coloring looks really nice, overall! There a few places it could be blended a bit more here and there, but I think you have a pretty good sense of where the lighting is coming from and all that.

The biggest issue here would be anatomy and proportions (which are never easy! I still draw things and end up thinking "What the heck...is this a human being or not??"). I think you've got a pretty good basic idea of how things should look, but there are some minor tweaks that would improve the proportions that would really make a difference. Blue Beetle looks the best, but his left arm is just a bit too small, even if it's hanging back. Make it a bit bigger, and he should be fine! You also have my problem, which is the plague of feet. I HATE drawing feet. Now you know why my portraits are almost always bust-up.

Feet have really different shapes depending on how you look at them, and they should be big enough to support the body. Finally, Flash's left arm is also a bit small, and his legs are too. Foreshortening is the bane of my existence, because legs are so hard to draw bent, and even harder when you're looking right at them. I would try imagining how tall you'd want him to be, and then draw his legs for that size body. Does that make sense?

For all these issues, I definitely recommend practicing by drawing from either real life (if you can) or looking at stock images of poses you like. The more unusual the pose, the better it is for you!

I can't wait to see how you improve, because you've already got a great command of the basics here!

=Altairess Jan 8, 2013 Student Digital Artist

I'm still learning lots and lots with anatomy XD It's so frustrating sometimes D: But I'm learning lots. And feet xD definitely I just noticed how small they are. Flash's and Blue beetles arms as well O_O they need to be bigger.

I'll need to give a go at stock images lol
I've been drawing all sorts of weird poses lately..they don't turn out perfect.. but they're definitely great for practice <3

thanks for the great critique again

it's most appreciated <3

=astarayel Jan 9, 2013

Anatomy is strange in general. If you've got the funds to spare, an anatomy book for art might help! I got one for Christmas, and I've already learned so much about proportions and all that.

I think with guys, my tendency (and yours maybe) is to go with female proportions because they're familiar. But men are manly and bulky and big. Hooray!

They are so fun to practice, to. When else will you have the excuse to draw someone pretending to fall off a chair or whatever?

You're very welcome!!

~SilverlightGhost Jan 8, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Oh this looks great! I'm so happy with it! Thanks so much!

=Altairess Jan 8, 2013 Student Digital Artist

Glad you like it!!
_{_{I was worried that wouldn't..}}
Thanks soo much

~SilverlightGhost Jan 8, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

And why wouldn't I?

You're so welcome!

~Lightning28335 Jan 8, 2013 Student Photographer

X3 awesome job Loki!

=Altairess Jan 8, 2013 Student Digital Artist

Thanks a lot

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